caloric thought
somewhere between the intake,
of calorie eight hundred and forty seven,
and nine hundred twenty two,
i had this un-categorized, salty thought.
but by the time i found a low carb pen,
i digested it.
smoky pauses
in the midst of drags,
of cancer's pen,
and stained brown thought,
lie the tales of merry organs.
and with a warning i cough,
stories lost in smoky air.
ignition
winter gives me time to think,
with periods of waiting
for my auto to heat,
before i can be assimilated
on rounded rubber feet.
last call
in between shots
of caramel friends,
stumble jokes that rip
through monotony and
captive audiences.
it was during this time ,
a slurred slip
cost me her affections.
















Comments
I love smoky pauses, it's just evil...and caloric thought is clever. But I think last call is the one that affected me the most.
maybe steed?
lol i usually use that but i've used it in two poems this past bunch of weeks already. perhaps it would sound better. not many people use chariot in regular dialogue around here on the east coast usa, how about down under?
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"That's poetry. I'm full of poetry now. Rot and poetry. Rotten poetry." - e.h.
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Painting is silent poetry, and poetry is painting with the gift of speech. --Simonides
the Unknown Artists Project
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"That's poetry. I'm full of poetry now. Rot and poetry. Rotten poetry." - e.h.
I'm really enjoying your style.
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Painting is silent poetry, and poetry is painting with the gift of speech. --Simonides
the Unknown Artists Project
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"That's poetry. I'm full of poetry now. Rot and poetry. Rotten poetry." - e.h.
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"Sealed with lies through so many tears
Lost from within, pursuing the end
I fight for the chance to be lied to again"
Evanescence
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"That's poetry. I'm full of poetry now. Rot and poetry. Rotten poetry." - e.h.
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"Sealed with lies through so many tears
Lost from within, pursuing the end
I fight for the chance to be lied to again"
Evanescence
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